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So tell me what you think about it? Please i want feedback.
Gage- Posts : 9
Join date : 2011-04-17
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You had a good flow of how the stanzas went together, it made the poem fit with the feeling you had it foresee. I have a question though; Where did you get the idea to write this type of poem?
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I didn't kill anyone don't worry. But someone,but my best friend had betrayed me. In the moment of sadness i wrote this.
Gage- Posts : 9
Join date : 2011-04-17
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Ok, I know nothing about songs and poems- But I've listened to many and that was amzing.
Evelyn- Posts : 1
Join date : 2011-04-17
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